II.25. Exercise 25 - Bad style

03/12/2019 - 08:00 pm - Bad style.

Another thing to think about is the chance of crime getting worse.

- Another factor to considered is the possibility of crime increasing.

Regrettably, these days lots of people don’t have jobs.

- Nowadays, the rate of unemployment is very high.

Sometime soon they will find a vaccine for malaria.

- In the near future, a vaccine against malaria might be find.

A few years ago, the price of property in Japan went down a lot.

- After 2010, the price of Japan property decrease considerably.

You can’t always trust the numbers in that report.

- The numbers in that report are not all reliable.

Sadly, the high inflation led to poverty, social unrest and so on.

- The severe inflation led to poverty and social unrest.

He was over the moon when he won the prize.

- He delight it to win the prize.

I think we could pay students to study.

- It can be conceivable to pay the students when they study well.

A few years ago, they allowed women to vote.

- In 1924, women were allowed to vote.

What were the main causes of the Russian Revolution ?

- The main causes of the Russian Revolution were the former government, the economic crisis and the influence of the other European countries.