II.6. Exercise 6 - Writing process - final version of my first paragraph

08/10/2019 - 8:20 pm - Writing process - step final version of my first paragraph.

Final version of my paragraph around the topic: ""The introduction of tablets in school to help children to learn" Opinion

       In my opinion, propose tablets to young children to learn, is very unproried and is really going to bring lots of bad consequences on their health and development. More and more schools, are equipping themselves with tablets, and this new technology is also spreading to home, and everywhere in children's lives. First, the very early use of these screens leads to psychic problems and disorders in the own construction of children. To give an example, a panel of americans researchers have shown the negative effects of screens on the ability to concentrate, the good language development and motor skills of children who use them. Secondly, using too many screens from childhood leads to serious impacts on physical health. For example, it is now known that the use of tablets causes sleep disorders and consequences on vision, such as myopia, on children under  10 years of age who use them. I really think that from their earliest age, we must try to protect them as much as possible from screens and new technologies. To summarize my opinion on this topic, I believe that the introduction of tablets at school for small children, seems to me absurd and very dangerous for their psychological, physical health and their future.